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I like it. Please update soon.

AAAAAAAWWWW poor Sev!! *sad* Update soon!!

No! I want to see them face off and Harry get his memory back.And one of Ron getting his head out of his as. But at least we know that he will do anything for Harry. :D

Poor Sev...the angst is killing ME! That last bit was heartbreaking....Harry's there and Sev doesn't know it!

I like it that Harry's memories of him and Sev keep seeping through, it gives me hope, although I have to say, it's also damned frustrating!!! But of course,....that't what you're going for, isn't it, Puppy, you sly little devil you!!! Great stuff and you keep me coming back for more. I just gobble this story down like a starving woman! You can't update fast enough for me!

When Sev checked the map I really groaned! He jsut missed it! You my friend are a Master of Suspense. *worsips* More chapters?

I think I might have said this a couple of chapters ago but this is SO FRUSTRATING!! GAH!! I feel like slapping Harry until he remembers lol...Update soon!!

Poor Severus! What a pickle he's in! Very evocative writing, Puppy. I can just picture Ralph Fiennes as Voldemort, with that voice he does so well. Brilliant, both of you!

I especially liked the end bit, Severus convincing himself he'll never get Harry or children or his happy ending. Hope that isn't a preview of what's to come. Poor Severus deserves some happiness after what he's been through. Good writing, as always, and still intriguing. Can't wait to see how Severus figures this one out!

Again, ewwwwwwwwwwwww! Poor Sev!! That Voldemort's a right bastard, isn't he, taking advantage of Sev's area of expertise like that! I hope Harry comes to his senses soon and gives Sev some hot and smutty loving for all he's been through for him! Can't help wondering too if Ron mighten be a bit less testy if Hermione gave it up already, yeah? That's it! Hot, smutty loving for everyone!!! Yay!!!

LOL. As I stated in my previous review, I like where you're going with this, (Voldemort eww!smut aside) and I'm liking how you're weaving the canon bits in with your own storyline. I'm still intrigued, still waiting in breathless anticipation to see what happens, and will still keep coming back for more, more, MORE from my favourite author! :)

Ooooo. I hope he gets his memory back soon. So he can have a real conversaation with Severus and not one he is making up...in a way. I hope you understand what I mean.

I loved every single word of this chapter. Another example of excellent writing. I've said this before about you, Puppy, the mark of a truly talented writer is to make readers feel for the characters, and this you do so very well. Your description of Harry and Sev kissing was so touching, of Sev not wanting to let go no matter what.....even the bit at the end, with Hermione listening to Harry, even those few words were so faultlessly written that it I wasn't grossed out at all. It fit in perfectly. I so admire your bravery in writing the story YOU have to tell, whether it be ewww!smut with Voldemort, or Hermione listening to Harry get screwed in his dreams, you're willing to risk squicking your readers, and not just for the shock value. We say smut, but I think that your stories are more erotica than smut (yes, there IS a difference!). Well thought out, imaginative, excellently written stories that are sensual and intriguing and keep your fans clamouring for more. Please update soon!