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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww..poor Ron! Haha! Nice story! I liked it!
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UM OK!!! This shit is so hot, I'm wet. I LOVE trio fics..and this is pretty damned good....you need a beta to clean it up a bit but it was quite engaging nevertheless...you should do a trio series..oh please : )
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice :) I like the concept, but it could use some editing - just a few spelling and grammar mistakes here and there.