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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story is that the end or will there be more.........I would love to read more if its not the end..
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You make faaar too many seperate paragraphs (some only a sentence long). if you were to combine them together, you would see that there's not a whole lot of narration there.
On another note, it is cruel and unusual punishment to finish this fic here!
other then that, that was fucking HOT!!! H.O.T.!!! ...I want more T_T
On another note, it is cruel and unusual punishment to finish this fic here!
other then that, that was fucking HOT!!! H.O.T.!!! ...I want more T_T
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really lovely story, you should do a one-shot sequel, Because to tell you the truth would love to know what happened.
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December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. very hot and what a great ending! perhaps a sequel?
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!!!!!! a Lucius and snape story I just love these!!!!!
can you email updates at poohnation74@yahoo.com for this story.
can you email updates at poohnation74@yahoo.com for this story.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's the first chapter or it's a one-shot ?? If it's not a one-sho I want th next chapter quickly please !! ^^ !!
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw!!! Lucius is so cute when he's desperately craving sex with Sev ^.^
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grea job! But really you can't leave it there. It's awesome. I would like to see what happenes.
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you evil thing!!!! dont you dare stop there!!!!! you cant end a oneshot with a cliffy1\\111111 eagerly waiting for more!!!
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! I love the descriptions!