rate_review Reviews

Well, you had an idea. It was an okay one, so that has to count for something, yeah? Your beta(s) must only focus on grammatical errors because you had some definite issues with tone and sentence structure. You promised a lot in your summery and then gave something that read as a children's storybook. Those are my thoughts. It's a good idea but maybe it should go back to the drawing boards.
~Unbloomed