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for Desert Jewel

by DracoHarry

person NightLo
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, who will notice the plan? Would Dumbledore do something? And what are James and Lily and Snape doing???
person Sakya
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, I love when Pansy is used in a plan, she usually fails in the most espetacular ways. :) She does make trouble, though, I can't wait to see what will happen.

Oh, is Mistress Ookami alright? I hope whatever problems she is having will be solved soon.

I just wanted to know why did you gave Raven's age in such a strange way: she was going to be "sent to an orphanage at the age of six months, thirty-two days, and seven weeks old".

Isn't it easier to say one week short of nine months? A month has 30/31 days (except February) or 4 weeks, so 32 days is a month and a day (or two depending on the month) and seven weeks is another month, plus three weeks - another 21 days. Wouldn't that make the baby eight months and three weeks (or 22/23 days, if you want to be more precise)?
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need either chapter 2 or 7 whoever posts it! *smile* What potion is Tom brewing? What is he up to? What instructions did he give Pansy?
person Nikte
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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