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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this was a fantastic installment. I really really liked how you made their first time awkward and uncomfortable, because it was much more realistic than most fics. This follow-up session was hot but not over the top "and the mountains roared." I really like this fic thus far.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Buckets!!!!! That would have to count as an EVIL CLIFFHANGER! As always, I was delighted to see the little update email in my inbox and came right over here to read. More! More! More!
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad that little misunderstanding was cleared up - but now they need to capitalise on it! In the bedroom! Waiting for more lusciousness.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol when I got to them in bed and had her thrown over the foot board you kept using the word counterpane. lol all i could think was... what the hell isn't she laying on the bed. Then she bit it and I thought ah okay it's a comforter so better look that up to be sure... and very glad to find she was indeed biting the comforter and not something very hard like a counter. You must be British. lol so that little misunderstanding was funny for me. Great story and really enjoy reading it. : )
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh! Nice lemon pie heating up. ROFL:
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????? AHH!! How DARE you!! Please update soon! I love your story and your writing!
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is engrossing AND sexy. "Then the eyes opened, glittering." Yummers! Evil cliffie. I look forward to seeing my FFN update in my FFN inbox knowing that I can wander over here and read your story in its full glory of NC-17-ness. Please update soon!