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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, yeah. I like the explanation of Snape's real thoughts and motivations. You don't make him too nice, which is good, but it's clear that he has a lot of respect for Hermione - also good.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey!
I dno why you don't get more reviews on this, but personally I really enjoyed reading your story so far
and I hope you're willing to post more :) I found the first few chapters a little 'bumpy' ;) but by now
they have greatly improved. I particularly enjoy the conversations between severus and hermione,
and their first encounter was very authentic. write more! :D
I dno why you don't get more reviews on this, but personally I really enjoyed reading your story so far
and I hope you're willing to post more :) I found the first few chapters a little 'bumpy' ;) but by now
they have greatly improved. I particularly enjoy the conversations between severus and hermione,
and their first encounter was very authentic. write more! :D
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh!! this is such a great story! and the cliffie! come on update soon! PLEASE!!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@12 i like it. update soon
*DB*
*DB*
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm a little confused? What's just happened?
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, breathtaking; I don't know when I've ever read a more intense and squirmy defloration scene. So in character, and Hermione's struggle to keep her thoughts to herself is so well done.
I love it! Would it be worth posting all the chapters you have on ff.net, so the readers here can enjoy the build-up too?
I love it! Would it be worth posting all the chapters you have on ff.net, so the readers here can enjoy the build-up too?
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lmfao. I enjoyed this. I love that you kept Snape snarky. Especially that last line x) And his demand for "known or unknown".
Well done :)
Well done :)