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The third chapter was better :) I liked it :)

Hi,

First off, I have to say that I read the first third chapter and wasnt that thrilled with it, but this second one is sooooo much better. I'm not a fan of underaged sex. I like that this Severus was able to resist that temptation. He only has to wait another two or th ree years...right? (Depending on if you are using the Time Turner theory) I am looking forward to reading more.

Red Writing Hood

OMG a wonderful story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Okay first two chapters were great. This chapter well it wasnt that good. Firstly you made Severus seem like students lust after him. Which if I am not mistaken is false.
I am not sure if your a virgin or not. To have one's hymen broken isn't a fun thing. Seriously it is very painful. I am sure other readers would agree.
Why does Severus have to have a "huge" penis? I am so sick of stories saying he or any other male has a huge penis. Average is pretty good. You also seem to be in a rush.
I am not sure if it is your first ever story.
Maybe you can read it over again.

O

I like it. Please update soon.

Hi Lucius marryme,
basicly I like your story,but I have a slight problem with the idea that Hermione is only in her 4th year.I do not think that even a drunk Severus would have slept with a student under the age of consent.Though I can understand that a student may have a crush on its professor,I hope that Severus will try to wait until Hermione has at least reached her 17 years.Sorry but I'm not a fan of minor stories.But I promise to read the next chapters,maybe the story will take a different storyline.Please don't feel offended.LOL Sureves Epans

Please update soon, I love this story!!

Hi there again,

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