rate_review Reviews

omg cant wait to read what happens next! ^.^

I really love this story. What a strange predicament to be in. Severus is hard to write, but you write him so well. Can't wait to see what happens.

that was a lovely chapter until you left me with the evil cliffie, lol.

I totally agree that it was very rude of that woman to just grab your notebook and start reading it it. I would have been absolutely livid. I don't know how you managed to hold your tongue.

thats one naughty school story hahaha...great chapter cant wait for more

I can't wait for the next update. You've got one addictive story going. =]

im really hooked on your story now, i cant wait to see what happens next .. all my luv xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

hey there!

wow, I read you entire story at once!
at first I was just skipping through to see whether I'd get interested into the plot
and suddenly I was quite caught up by it and read until the newest chapter!
so yeah, I hope you'll update again in a while :) I'll surely come back here
every now and then! keep going!

Hi Phoenix Rhapsody,
so Severus is staying in Hermione

That chapter was great!

Seeing my "name" in lights is almost as enticing as finding out what happens next. What a delightful reward - but I'm not the one who deserves to be recognized. Keep up the good writing - technically, you're very good, very smooth, very easy to read. I also like the fact that you're putting quite a bit of effort into this - lines like, " 'That's exactly what I expect you to believe' " from Hermione's Order interrogation don't just jump out of the blue (at least, not to most writers). I gather from your author's notes that you're a student - and I'm guessing a good one, who finishes papers before they're due. Mercy. Keep writing like this and you'll be doing it for a living, and no, I am not just scooping for First Place in the Reviewer's Reward Contest.

Cheers

CB