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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After Wood graduated, then Angelina Johnson became captain, and then Harry did. Interesting story.
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really LOVE this story!!!!
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 The punctuation needs tending in some places but otherwise it's a fair start. I wonder if Draco got into trouble for injuring a fellow player. It rather spoils the burgeoning romance for someone to pick up on his attraction though. It's always more fun and builds the tension if such forbidden feelings are hidden and other people discover it by accident.
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2 Punctuation, spelling and grammar are off. You didn't capitalize Malfoy's name at one point. It also seems rather silly to have Harry blundering around in the dark and muttering Draco's name to Ron. I suppose this is going to be a fluff fic, eh?
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why does he black out? What happens in chapter 3?
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh too cute! But this would mean 2nd year at the most. What year did Oliver graduate?
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry missed the quditch finals the first two years because of Riddles attacks. The third book mentions that as well as rhis being Olivers last chance to win the quiditch cups he graduates that year and there is no quiditch due to the triwizard tournement fourth year.