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I love it. Great start please update soon

Poor Hermione lol! Great job! Please add more soon

I think its a good start with an interesting idea for a plot. I like the idea of a Deatheater uncle. Very angsty! ~.~ Also, the grandfather is great grandfather right? Nice touch having the dreaded Fleur coming into it. Heh. I love Veela stuff. I use a bit myself.

Just a side note: I think Dialogue is very important to a scene but I would like to know a bit more of Hermione's thoughts, just because this is a shocking event and unfortunately dialogue can rarely carry the emotions necessary to evolve the reader in our "heroine's' plight. I love your start.

Keep writing!!!!

Wow, I think this is the longest review I ever left.

I love your story!!!
And I can

Good start, please update soon

ohhhhhhh sounds really good n promising :D

keep it up :D

Great post. Love the story, please post again soon. Thanks.

Love the twist. It's harder to find unique SS/HG stories now - I mean, there are so bloody many re-hashes of detentions and the like (I shouldn't complain; I read 'em all)- but this is certainly new! Can't wait to see where it goes.

Cheers

CB