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So...Harry is something that we did not know, would you kindly introduce them to us?

Nice! Thanks for the update. Love creature fics. Can't wait for Draco.

Hurry and update!!! i want to see Harry's wings!!!

Now this is getting good! I guess the next chapter would be the inheritence, but how about some Draco action...please...pretty please?

Hi, this looks like a good start to a story. I haven't come across a Harry as a Bivnara story so I am interested in how you will be taking this story forward. :-)

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Words that I found misspelled and their correct spelling in order are....Gringots=Gringotts(I'm pretty sure it has another t),decieded=decided, do you mean shrank or shrunk, aniversary=anniversary, payed=paid, wispered=whispered, recieve=receive, Gallions=Galleons (done a couple of times), immedietly=immediately (done twice), recieved=received, Scottland=Scotland, controling=controlling (done twice), intrest=interest, Quiditch=Quidditch (only happened once),Britan=Britain, acount=account, transfered=transferred, genuinly=genuinely, suprised=surprised (done twice), Griffindor=Gryffindor, comming=coming, certian=certain, previesly=previously. Not done yet, but will come back in a bit, computer has decided to be stupid and won't let me do some stuff. Have to restart.

Good chapter.

Good chapter.

I'm back! Hopefully this time I can finish. Oh, by the way, these are just mistakes for the second chapter, if you want me to look over the prologue and the first chapter I would be happy to. I think I'm starting from where I left off, but did you really mean Dumbledork or Dumbledore, also there was a word earlier the Phynix account, did you mean Phoenix. Okay, starting again. deffinatly=defiantly, extremly=extremely, inocent=innocent, torchure=torture, madmans= madman

Interesting start; I love Harry Creature/Magical Inheritance stories! Good luck writing. TTFN!