rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Oh my god!!! U reallyyy have to do the sequel,
So!, if u want to have us, all very happy, is u duty.
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i beg you for a sequel..please,dont make me down on my knee.

Sneaky Draco! Beautifully done. Loved it. I can't wait to read another one-shot. That is so Draco to do something really unexpected at the end of a situation.

Aww, poor thing, Loses her virginity and gets knocked up at the same time, that sucks.
Very well written!

Good story. Has sequel potential.

Ahhhhhhh! Het! I must admit, this is the first time in oh .... a good year now? That I have read het. Slash girl normally. BUT I decided to give it a try, coz I was like how do u get N/C in Draco/Hermione?? But I suppose I've been living in my slash world too much and keep thinking that all het is fluffy and happy which it isn't necessarily. But otherwise a good job. I liked the end few sentences, as he had put in a fertility potion to make her pregnant. I was first reading it and I was like BIRTH CONTROL doesn't matter its ur first time u could get PREGNANT!!! But no ... that's what he wanted all along.
Anyway, well done!
~gorgeousbowneyes

wow totally wasnt expecting him to do that
but i liked this story alot

I really enjoyed this story. I have to say I thibk there is more to this story than just a one shot. But if you decide that there is not then it still a really enjoyable read.

I have to say that I do really enjoy your storys my fav is after midnight. And I hope one day you decide to finish it cus its a great piece of work

omg hes so slick the drunk bastard! i loved it!