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for The Chosen Four

by Diayma

person alma
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter!!!!
person rainbow
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it
person Jan
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story!!! ^_^

I especially like the fact that in the book Hermione disliked the fact, that house elves were treated like slaves, and you, with your brilliant mind twisted it, and made her a princess of a kingdom that loves to have humans as slaves. He he... Love it.

Please Update Chapter 3 Soon. ^_~
person Maybe
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh.. very angsty, just as I like it. I found it intriguing so please continue...
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Though I dont know Tsubasa I think this is really interesting. And Id really like to read more of it, so for all it's worth; keep going^_^ As for blond or blonde both is correct, though blonde is used to descripe a womans hair (not a mans) while blond is gender-natural. I hope that helps^_^
person Hambares
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I am looking forward to more to see what will happen
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i like this story a lot. i've never seen anything like it. I hope you update soon. oh and btw it's blonde but it can be spelled either way. I think blond was made b/c people were too lazy to put the e at the end XD
person alma
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome start. want more!!!! please

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