rate_review Reviews

I Love the story. But I'm wondering when you'll update and or finish it.

I've been hoping this wasn't going to be a dead fic, I check back every now and again. I love everything about it, even the Severus and Narcissa subplot relationship. really, I was dancing on the ceilings when there was an update and sad when i finished it. I hope you keep on writing this lovely fic, there's far too few good ones out there.

I am so glad you haven't given up on the story. Hope to see more soon.

Great story!

This story has definitely gotten my attention. I'm actually impressed that you're making them wait....and it'll end up (hopefully) a relationship. It's been very well written. Please add me to your update list.

Yocum1219@yahoo.com

*claps hands in excited manner* want more, want more! Please update again!

Oh my, this is just amazing. I will admit I read the whole thing in one evening (but not one sitting), and I just could not stop. Your description and use of the English language is wonderful, and the characterizations are perfect. I love the direction this is going, with the subtle changes, even though I do not normally like this type of situation. The suspense leads to a perfect balance of tensions, and I cannot wait to see where this goes.

If it's not too much trouble would you mind addding me to the update list? Thank you very much, I am cvhern@nycap.rr.com. I hope there's more soon!

I just came across this story today, so I haven't had to endure the waiting for new installments like everyone else, but I am curious as to what will happen next. This is a bit different from the "The Malfoys adopt Harry" stories I usually come across, which is mightily refreshing. I was wondering if I may join this mailing list for updates? My email is angelikdemons@hotmail.com.

<3 <3 Lovely chapter. I feel like I'm being strung along by a heartless vixen. :P
You know, when I stumbled upon this story, I was actually just looking for a PWP without love or much sentiment; a quick 'wham, bam, thank you, sir,' if you will. :P (Those seem so hard to find! It's mate this and mate that, everywhere.) But I was very pleasantly surprised by your story. I don't mind waiting for it in your story because there is the promise of fulfillment. Thus far, this story has been very amiably teasing. :3

I wanted to point out in an earlier review that, as Lucius is educated and cultured, he might not end his sentences w/ prepositions. I haven't noticed it in this chapter, however.

All chapters I have read have thus far been very nicely done, and this one was especially titillating. :3