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for Halloween Mix-Up

by Tassanaburrfoot

schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person shelagh
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update!
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH, you left it at such a critical point! lol, i am bad about leaving readers in a cliff hanger, so I find it funny. I love your story, very original! I hope you do not keep us hanging too long. Poor Hermione. She is in such a mess. Harry and Ron are going to go nuts when they find out. Update soon..puhleeeaassseeee
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. Poor Hermione. I hope that she will be alright. If all six touched her and they get kicked out of school, won't they suffer terribly from the spell. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story and the premise is quite interesting. Sometimes, it feels a tad rushed. I guess I'm being a greedy reader and want more details. Thank you for sharing. Pitt
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm not sure i can feal sorry for her. I guess ackward is bad, but the boys she gets so far are fabulous. thanks for sharing!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I am glad that Zabini only touched her sleeve and not her skin. I look forward to reading the next chapter to see who she is with next. I am glad that she has a private room now. I noticed the mistake in one of my past reviews, thanks for telling me aobut it.
person Karin84c
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I am definately looking forward to more!

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