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for Hidden in Plain Sight

by Katay

schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, Luna. Of course she'd be the one to see it. Can't wait for more, and I hope you include more George in the future!
person Citten
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! YES A NEW CHAPTER!!! i have so been looking forward to this chapter most cause i just love this stoy and i....well you get the idea. i new i love luna for a reason. i really liked the part in book seven with them visiting lunas house, it only took her five seconds! hehehe. well she was a ravenclaw. well i just want more, lots more! so update soon -k- :)
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person DB1
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@10 thats cruel to stop it there!! update soon

*DB*
person Utopia
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 (I'll go back and review the rest soon; shhh... I'm supposed to be revising for my Jan exams - don't tell anyone, it would ruin my street-cred as a know-it-all who always does her work!)

Just one comment: I expected the last line to be something along the lines of: "Did you mention something about giving them a show, darling?" purred Lucius into his sated wife's ear.

10/10
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see who is at their home.
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Please add more soon
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: I think you handled the breakup of Ron and Hermione just right. I agree that they wouldn
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10: I

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