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by EighthSaga

person ametomoe
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was really good! (the lemon, and the rest of the story) gentlemanly draco is really cute, and although i wish the lemon were longer, it needed to be fast this time cause they were both so desparate. i can't wait for more! i'll be sure to read your other stories too.
person vicly
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story was defenitely very well writen. I liked the progression and the insights into Draco's mind.
Keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next story!
person smmz79
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok sooo i just got onto this story and i love it please keep writing......I Love how you wrote the bonding it was well done!!
person ml
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm disappointed that it's all going to come to an end soon. Maybe you'll write a sequel? Let me know when your other story is posted, I don't see it yet. =)
person Panther Eyes
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
finally!!! i didnt think i was going to take it anymore. by the way great sex sence.
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hm what did i like about this chapter... oh the title of that one book about veela psychology when screw you becomes screw me. lol i cracked up at that one. and i like how he asked her to hurry up and be comfortable with him so they could bond. i can imagine him being all desperate and pleading. he should so lose control and then hermione buckles. but that chapter is already written so i shall see soon..
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They finally bonded! Hey, what was with Zabini eh? Out of nowhere he's just touching Hermione? Great update, I can't wait for more and I have to say that I am so totally excited for the Draco/Hermione/Blaise fic. I can't wait! Let us know in which section you post for sure though...I don't want to miss out!
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! ur first and second lemon, right? i love this! u've done great job for me i think :D just sweet and tender and wild lol i like it.

is it gonna be finished? aww...i don't want it to finish yet :P haha but yeah they've already bonded so what i want more? xD may be what's happen afterward and great epilogue :D

i'm not fan of threesome (will it be included in ur next story? xD) but i also like BZ/HG/DM too...i'll read it surely :) well, but i really don't want this story to end!

<3
person Shell
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is not over yet is it ??? You're doing a great job so far. It's not bad at all. It seemed a bit rushed but still good ! Looking forward to what your writing next.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm sad to see this story comeing to an end, but I'm also really excited to read your new one.

I am a little confused though about only the veela half of Draco talking to Hermione in her dreams. Is it like split personality?

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