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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My favorite part of the story so far is when Draco comes into her room to sleep. I love how he tells her so matter of factly that he's going to be sleeping in there and there is really nothing she can do to stop it.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My favourite bit... simple! Chapter one, where Draco discovers he has fangs!
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far I think Chapter 8 is my favorite. Why, I have no idea, I think because the story is fianlly falling into place.
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this chap bc of the end of the chapter.
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this last moment between them the most, however, I do like the possesive!Draco at the beginning. It was nice.
:) I just found this story so you can't blame me for not reviewing before :)
:) I just found this story so you can't blame me for not reviewing before :)
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I had an idea!
If you ever have the feeling that you can't write anything more that's interesting other than sexual tension, remember this: VEELA ARE EXTREMELY ATTRACTIVE TO THE OPPOSITE SEX (remember the Quidditch World Cup?). If you want, put something about how there are girls fawning all over him as the two months are ending ((because when the Veela and the Mate are about to bond, the pheromones in the Veela heighten), suddenly all the other members of the Opposite sex [lol and same :p] notice his sexyness, just the Veela naturally only has eyes for their mate. This 'heightened pheromone(sp?)' can also bring more astuteness in the Mate and Hermione won't be able to control the jelousy she has over the other girls. That alone will have enough emotion to stir up some undoubted feelings and also strengthen the thoughts she will have.
BUT this is your story. :)
If you ever have the feeling that you can't write anything more that's interesting other than sexual tension, remember this: VEELA ARE EXTREMELY ATTRACTIVE TO THE OPPOSITE SEX (remember the Quidditch World Cup?). If you want, put something about how there are girls fawning all over him as the two months are ending ((because when the Veela and the Mate are about to bond, the pheromones in the Veela heighten), suddenly all the other members of the Opposite sex [lol and same :p] notice his sexyness, just the Veela naturally only has eyes for their mate. This 'heightened pheromone(sp?)' can also bring more astuteness in the Mate and Hermione won't be able to control the jelousy she has over the other girls. That alone will have enough emotion to stir up some undoubted feelings and also strengthen the thoughts she will have.
BUT this is your story. :)
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My favorite chapter has to be Dreams, i love the line "why do you deny me?" that haunts her! Glad you came back, hope you continue, and feel better!
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How about I love the whole story? lol Great update! By the way, I was so happy to see you had updated....it's been a while eh? Hope you update again soon!
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! an update. i really like this story. i think my facorite part is defintely in the newest chapter when Draco brings Hermione inside after she fell asleep outside. its when she kisses him on the nose and says she is going to bed. i love sweet moments like that...so keep up the great writing!
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah...finally...u've already updated new chapter! can't wait to read more and more lol things are getting more exciting huh? xD well done...
wanna know how they'r gonna survive Veela situation in next stage xD
keep up good work, Please!!!
wanna know how they'r gonna survive Veela situation in next stage xD
keep up good work, Please!!!