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I'm so glad you updated! I think my favorite moments was the 'good morning' dream Hermione had. I can't understand Hermione, though. If Veela are so rare, and she's so bright, she should know her life with Draco will be wonderful. He wouldn't deny his Mate anything her heart desired. Hopefully, she'll reach that conclusion before either is too physically harmed. :D

after she's fallen for him, please don't make her a passive house witch, give her an amazing job and a great future, and please no kids yet!!!

Very nice story!

This is a really great story. I'm so glad to have found this. Do you have it anywhere else?
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Your story is really great, please please update soon!

Hello
just a quick review to say I love this fic. I really liked how Draco planned to win Hermione over: a snogging planning? really?
anyway, update soon, I can't wait for the rest of the story

i need you to update this please? your killing me!

I think this is an absolutely delectable story... One of the best I've read so far on this website!! Please update soon! It is sooo good!!!!
P.S. Hope you feel better

Although it is an overdone plot, I like where you're going with this. I really liked last chapter's ending where they ended up just sleeping together (not in a naughty way). It was really cute. I like tender Draco (yum?). Keep up the good work.

Hi! So, I've been reading this fic for the past two days (and I haven't been reviewing I know! I'm sorry!), and I wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed it so far. I don't generally read Veela fics but I was drawn to this one for some reason. I'm glad that I did because it is lovely. I like the plot and it is very entertaining.

For Hermione's characterization, I think you did a wonderful job. She is resistant and firey and confused but also brave and curious. She hasn't fallen for Draco yet and we can tell that it will be a while before she does.

That being said... I think that Draco's characterization is slightly off. But that isn't necessarily a bad thing. I mean, he seemed to accept everything so easily. Too easily perhaps. And he isn't even freaking out over the fact that his fated is Hermione Granger, a mudblood. BUT I know that some of that is because of the Veela instincts and you made that very clear. Though, in the future I would love to see some thoughts about his family and the war and what he thinks about that. Other than that, I think he is well characterized. Like the way he responds to things and stuff.

There were a few spelling errors but I didn't copy them or point them out, sorry! But, I would definitely be willing to beta for you if you are interested. I'm online every day and I'd get it done quick. :) I also beta for another person so I have a tad bit of experience. If you are interested let me know.

So all in all, the fic is very lovely and I can't wait for more. Looking forward to an update!