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by LVanna

schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
See, I told you you could do it!
person Apryl
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You go girl! About time she grew a pair. I know it takes awhile to get to that point. I almost ended up with the M.I.L. from hell, but managed to get out just in time. Her son had ways of getting what he wanted and was ill-tempered if he didn't. At least Hermione doesn't have to worry about Ron in that way. I don't expect that he will let her go that easily, but at least she won't have to fear for her safety. Ya know, it would be the ultimate "up-yours" for her to run into Molly after she and Sev finally have a baby. It would be the final justice for someone who has had to put up with lines like, "Why couldn't you want children, like a normal woman?" for so long!! Let that be a lesson to you ladies,if you want a career never marry a man whose mother is a homemaker because he'll expect the same from you.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and i hope u update soon there arent a lot of people getting really good storys out and this is te 1st good story i have read in a long time so please keep updating!
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic, please keep updating. I'm really enjoying reading this story. let me know when you are updating next.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think its a good story, I'm not getting many reviews either. I think the average is one review pr 100 hits. Kind of sad really. My advise is to tell your stoty it is inside you clamering to get out. At least it is being read. Good luck!
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
am glad hermione told molly it is mother in laws like her that make you want to scream
person gitana
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story so far, and I hope you keep updating as often as you have been.

I'm really curious to see where you are taking this.

Is this a short or long fic?

- Love Gitana
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person bryn
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totally heart this story! It's a realistic portrayl of what would happen. Keep updating!
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, im certainly enjoying this story , but sweetie you can't be browbeating people for reviews or you'll lose readers.

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