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So much drama.

sooooooooo good. yet soooooo sad. please up date soon.

Not liking you too much right now...heartbreaking chapter...if this gets worse, I don't know how much longer I'll be able to hang on. Draco deserves better.

I envy Harry's sharp mind, I never would have thought of that antidote potion... yet I'm still afraid of how this will turn out...
Please let the boys be OK, and Draco, and Harry, and everybody! Btw I love how mature and supporting Ron is in the fic. And Draco deserves a spanking for being so stubborn! God damn!!!

WOW THIS WAS GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE

Its become so touching now...so sad and sweet! Thanks for updating!

Soooo need chapter 33!!! Draco has to be there!!! He just has to be!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo...don't kill off Mommy Draco! *takes over the world in an attempt to use that to stop this story from adding death of a beloved character to it*

Ch. 32 Harry really never does talk about the Dursleys, does he? I don't think that's a fault on the parts of Ron or Hermione that they didn't pry. They may have picked up on his unhappiness and decided not to discuss something that he didn't want to talk about. Harry can be stubborn that way.

It occurs to me that Harry might want to make arrangements for the children in case of a tragedy. If Draco dies, he will take care of the children. But Harry's now training to be an Auror, a dangerous profession. What if he gets killed as well? He should start drawing up papers that will place the twins in proper care; after his experience with the Dursleys, he wouldn't want them to wind up with people like that.

Of course, Narcisa is the obvious choice. She's mellowed a lot since Harry first knew her. But her lifestyle is a little too...distant. There's a good chance the boys might grow up arrogant and snobbish the way Draco first was. Maybe they could be given to Andromeda? Little Teddy would have company and the twins would get into another family.

These are just a few random thoughts that came to me while reading this chapter. After the melancholy of contemplating Draco's probable death passed, I started thinking along more practical lines. I'm curious as to how you will handle this.

This is turning out to be a tender, bittersweet story. I remain an avid, charmed reader.

As I was reading, I thought....at least this chapter isn't going to be sad. It finished that way. I really hope there is a happy ending.