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schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, sorry i haven't been keeping up with reviews... I know I should because I do love this story.

Im glad Harry was able to get out of the house, though I do realize just how difficult it was for both of them. And that part at the end when Harry and George were talking about Fred I seriously started crying. Gah, I'm such a baby.

Anyway, fabulous chapter as always. Keep up the good work and Merry Christmas, or whatever you celebrate!
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad Harry left the damn house. I understand they are going through a tough time, but I think that Harry was prone to being codependent and cutting off important people before the rape happened and now it's just exaberated. I hope Draco is gonna be alright at home alone...please don't have him having a PTSD flashback. I hope he's getting stronger. So glad the Weasley's don't hold a grudge. I'm glad you explained how George knew because that was always bugging me. Maybe one day Draco will be welcomed at the Burrow as well. This was a feel good chapter...now I wonder how Ginny would react around Harry now?
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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person QueenB
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 13 I believe I've figured out what I like best about your stories. I look forward to the discussions between Harry and Draco even more than the sex since the sexual intimacy seems to flow naturally from the closeness they establish beforehand. the discussions they have about their past and the people who know them show, for once, just how different they are...but how alike in the things that matter to them.

Harry has a life outside of his feelings for Draco: friends, allies, admirers, etc. Draco is the odd man out since he no longer has these things (if he ever did) and the Slytherin obviously is feeling that lack keenly. How strange is it to think that the boy who came off as so privileged and aloof is actually the truly needy one?

Thanks for making your characters so three dimensional and the story so believable. This tale gets better and better every time I read it.
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so freakin' hot....I like how much they play. I feel so bad for Draco, I guess it's gonna be up and down for a long time for him though.
person janae
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chap 13 please
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have a really horrible feeling that something really bad is about to happen

person shadow
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter made me cry... or it could be cause im an emotional mess today... either one

anyway it was awsome can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person graballz
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, another great chapter, SP!!!!! *applause* Brilliant, just brilliant! I loved the first story and I love the sequel so far!! I was so sad about what happened to Draco (and at the same time, I torture him all the time!)

So glad to see that he's slowly getting better and moving on. Love the realistic views on it all and how long it really WOULD take someone to get over something like that.

Honestly, I thought you were going to describe Tonks and Remus and their reactions to seeing Teddy and Teddy's reaction to them a bit more...and I was prepared to cry...but I didn't.

But LOVED confused Snape and amused Dumbledore. I was also hoping for a bit more interaction between Harry and his parents, and Harry and Sirius. It would've been interesting to see how Sirius and Andromeda reacted too, since they got along. And Sirius' reaction to Teddy and his orange hair, of course.

Oh well. It was still a GREAT chapter. I think my favorite part was Harry sticking up for Draco and "making a scene". Totally something I'd do. Can't wait for more!
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you are both sick of hearing this but I'm certainly not sick of telling you it; this story is wonderfully fantastic! I just don't know what else to write about it. It is so well written and highly emotive. Brava.

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