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Ch. 12 This was a very moving chapter and the tension and turbulent emotions were captured with dead-on accuracy. The meeting with the Weasleys was a shock, just as it was intended to be, and now I'm going to wait anxiously for chapter 13 to see what happens next.

Best chapter in this story yet IMO. It was heartbreaking how people were reacting to Draco but not surprising...can't really blame some of them as they probably don't know the full story about Draco's actions during his 7th year since he doesn't want to tell anyone. But the homophobia is not cool and I hope that if and when they do have a child of their own they can combat some of that by just doing it, cause it sounds pretty taboo. I wish that who ever said that to Draco would step up to get smacked down. What a coward. I just really felt this chapter's dialogue and I don't know..it felt really real reading it. The interaction between Narcissa and Andromeda was pretty dead on for sisters who don't speak...it's good that Draco can serve as an example of change. I'm so glad to see that Mrs. Weasley remains Mrs. Weasley no matter what happens, Harry will always have a mother in her no matter what. I wish Ginny had been there, I would have loved to see how she's dealing with this as time goes on. The funniest part was Snape arching his eyebrow at Draco..lol. That's so Snape. I hope you can revisit this exhibition when they are enabled with hearing and speech because I'd love to hear how the portraits respond to this new union.

The tension in this chapter, is very high. I am enjoying this story very much.

Soooo need chapter 12!

Ch. 11 Goodness, that was hot and kinda kinky. It makes you wonder how many of those guys in the locker rooms had wet dreams about Harry...and that broom. :P~~~~

chapter 12 please

awww...nice to hear what they were really thinking back in ALSB...why do I feel something bad about to happen..they are too happy and you guys always screw it up when they're happy like this :p..and what's draco cooking up in that lab?

Ch. 10 Oh. Goshums. That was so unbelievably hot. Like Draco, I literally forgot all the ugliness that had preceded it. (steal. this. fanfic.) Oops! Did I just type that? My bad. I don't steal. I may require...inspiration. But I don't steal. Not the copyrighted stuff, anyway.

lol@desirable number one. That was funny....wow, I wonder would have happened if Draco had revealed his crush back then. Probably nothing....that was hot. I like it when Harry takes as much as he gives...It seems Draco is healing up just fine.lol.

This is probably one of my favorite scenes in this so far, it was amusing, and then satisfying.