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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I like the idea. No, I really do. It's just...as a really grammatically-obsessed author, I found a lot of grammatical errors in this document. Not to mention, the paragraph about Harry crawling into bed with Ron and crying is rather confusing.
Again, that's not to say that I don't like the plotline! To the contrary; Ron angst is one of my favourite things. If you'd like, I could always make a few suggestions to the grammar? Meh...only if you'd truly like.
~Bradly~
Again, that's not to say that I don't like the plotline! To the contrary; Ron angst is one of my favourite things. If you'd like, I could always make a few suggestions to the grammar? Meh...only if you'd truly like.
~Bradly~
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it, please more! you're an amazing writer!!!!
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn this is good and as your BETA I give you a 5!
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Ron, you sweet cluless dork, I love you! This is so cute, please continue :)
I rated it a 3, but only cause it would be nice if you got it beta, otherwise it'd be a 5 in my R/H radar.
I rated it a 3, but only cause it would be nice if you got it beta, otherwise it'd be a 5 in my R/H radar.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA! I bet he could! I saw the movie! Cho Chang is a lucky skank! nice fic going here hun! I love Harry/Ron! There neds to be more...bcause I believe Ron really loves Harry not Hermione....i mean COME ON! Its a big love triangle! Ron loves Harry..Harry loves Draco Drao loves Harry and Hermione loves school. See!? Thanks for posting!
Liking the start of this,
*Lilith*
Liking the start of this,
*Lilith*