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March 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see more please are you still writing it ?
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July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope to see more soon ;-)
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aside from the few spelling mistakes this story is rather good and I shall definately continue to read it. A small suggestion that I will make, however, is don't have such large blocks of text. Split your text into paragraphs (around 3-5 sentences) so that its easier to read.
Could you email me when you update, I definately don't want to miss the next installment. gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
Could you email me when you update, I definately don't want to miss the next installment. gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is really good so far.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's not bad, but it needs A LOT of work. you really should have edited it before you posted it. find a good bets and hash it out five or six times, then it'll be awesome ;)
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, I basically like this story, but you are right about the spelling errors and stuff. If you'd like I'd fix that for you. I hope that there is more to this soon. Oh, and if you would like to take me up on my offer, e-mail me or send me a message somehow or something.
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well first of all we need Harry's reaction and Voldemort telling Harry the 'truth' about his parents deaths. Is Severus on Voldie's side or Dumbles. (Yes I shorten names.) What is the best way to get revenge on Dumbles?
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read this before when it was on here. I'm interested to see where you take this... Voldie!Veela is always fun. I think there was only one other Voldemort Veela fic that I can remember... makes it a rare find. The only thing that bothered me aside from spelling/grammar is that it felt a little rushed, but... well, I tend to rush things, so I sure can't complain. If you would like, I could beta for you and toss some ideas off. My email is Blackenednightshade at yahoo dot com, if you're interested, drop me a line. Take Care!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love Veela Stories.
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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