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for Fire and the Dragon

by Kimberly1983

person Angie30
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I laughed myself silly when she threw up all over Harry! Great job at the drama and then mix it with a touch of humor. Brillant.
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um, another little mistake... shortly after Hermione redecorated Harry's person, Severus calls her Mr. Granger. Now I know Severus wouldn't have made that mistake, so it must have been you! But don't worry yourself about it, pregnancy makes us a little crazy.
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story and I think its wonderfully done! I can't wait to read the next chapter(s). Keep up the good work!!
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
as usual, your story is amazing. i love it! i'm glad to see hermoine is going back to her normal self, and pregnant!! omg!! what's gonna happen? update soon!
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love what you are doing! Pesonally, I think she should keep the baby and drain Ron dry on child support, medical expenses and anything else she can get.
person shelagh
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,, Oh my God I didn't expect Hermione to get pregnant. That was unexpected. Good job in keeping us in suspense and coming up with different ideas. Keep up the googd work and update soon.
-DarkDragon05
person crinna
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am enjoying this fic but i cant believe she is going to keep the parasitic spawn of that ginger twit Ron. one shouldn reward and propagate rapists. their genetic material should die with them............sorry i had to get that out good story keep on writing. but please don't go too sappy, after all you wrote such a powerful and dramatic rape seen you should give the same care to realism for her current unwanted situation.
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very nice and slightly sappy scene. LOL. I really loved it. The rain washing away the tears...very nice.

Red

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