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Wow, this is a promising start. I love fics where Ron is the bad and Severus the good guy seeking revenge ;)
My own twisted mind enjoys this ;)
Anyway, i am so looking forward to how this will continue.
Good luck with your pregnancy.
Jocy

this is an amazing story so far!! oh please update soon! does ron remember what he did?

I love it! Keep going this is too good to set aside!

First of all, I must admit that fic's that allows Ron, or any other culprit, to sucsess in raping Hermione, usually annoys the hell out of me. Rape is such a degree of pain and humiliation on the victem, and most authors tends to let the culprit get away with way to little in terms of punichment, letting the rape being a major part of the story, while punishing the offender is of less importance. So far, your story is to "young" to make a jugdement in that department, so I still hope that you will let the punishment fit the crime? The plot has been done quite a few times before, but then again, by now most plots have been done once or twice before and they can still bring a new story for the readers.
I will follow your story, and I hope that you will bring satisfaction in the department of punishing Ron. I ask you to not let Ron get anywhere near her, to let him getting away with more now will have a very depressing effect on me:-)) Hopefully Harry will be smart enough to add two and two together and be suspicious about what Ron did after they parted ways.
Update again soon!

Very nice. I like your writing very much. I can't wait to read more.

Now why would you be so evil as to leave it at that? I'm on the edge of my seat, seriously I am. I really like this story, good drama, great writing, is it any wonder I'm hooked and begging for more? I have to know, do they find out it was Ron? (The smarmy bastard) Anyway, can't wait to see everyone's reactions now that they know it's Hermione. Can't wait for the next update, keep up the great work!