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for Fire and the Dragon

by Kimberly1983

schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
She is there, and they are such a beautiful family, im just glad she doesnt have red hair.

I am sure severus will be a wonderful if insecure daddy :)

FANTASTIC work, really. Every morning and evening i come here to check to see if you updated!
Thanks a lot
Jocy
person Citten
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah! that was fun and i loved both chapters!!! one question how do you pernounce her name? thanks later! :)
person Delfin
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwww :')

that was so sweet :)

the baby, his proposal not the most romantic one but one can sense the feelings :)
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was an incredible chapter. I am glad that Hermione accepted Severus proposal. I hope that she and Severus can continue to love each other and give Persephone and little brother or sister. I look forward to reading the epilogue.
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent ending to this story. I am glad that they had a little boy.
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is great! I love this story and will most likely reread it more then once! Great job! Luv Sin!
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is defiently a happily ever after for Severus that is belivable. It was a great story and I really hope that you write more and soon. Happy Holidays
person Angie30
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous chapter! I can understand Hermione's embarassment about the bowel movement in the deliever room, been there done that. lol Anyways I love the name you gave the baby and it was cute that Severus passed out. Update soon.
person drlincu
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story!

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