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for Fire and the Dragon

by Kimberly1983

schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story , but not loving the cliffhangers, please keep writting!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely hilarious. I think that Harry and Severus both feinting was funny, but it actually happens to some men. I hope that Hermione teases both of them for a while about it. I loved the name she chose for her daughter. I am glad that the baby has brown hair and not red. It will be much easier on Hermione that way. I can't wait to read more to see how Mr. and Mrs. Weasley are around them.
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I am glad that Mrs. Weasley apologized to Hermione. I look forward to reading the next chapter soon.
person Citten
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for once i will agree short and sweet. it was short-but-it was wonderful just the same! sorry i was not able to review before now it has been kinda crazy in my life. hope all it well with you! :)
person Delfin
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg what's gonna happen! o.O

hehe :)

the sex scene was hot and Severus was so gentle and understanding =)
person Myrna
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooops... :S
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I am glad that she is willing to give Severus a chance to be in her life and the life of the baby. I absolutely loved what Hermione did to Lucius Malfoy. I wonder if he will figure it out and try to confront her about it. I can't wait to read more soon.
person nanoq
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet!
Great chapter.

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