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by lazycrazykitten

person akume
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. Kinda leaves you wanting more. Until then.
person amysds
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amysds 2007-12-10 id # 3001146928
Wow that's awesome! Very exciting, do you need a fill in beta for a few weeks? I really like the start of this and can't wait to see what happens next, as usual we see how inept Dumbledore is until HE wants/needs something - then it's like, but what could have happened, never mind that he dumped a baby on a muggle doorstep who had just been orphaned and was the savior of their world... NOooooo He'll be ok for 10 years, what could happen!? Poor Harry was driven to the brink by the relatives, Vernon never had a chance to regret threatening and hurting his nephew before POW! In the U.S. Harry would be protected and evaluated before being put in some sort of foster family or group home with a counselor assigned to him, since there was obvious abuse. Don't know how Surrey would handle it, but it would be interesting if he was adopted/fostered by some ninja or something so he kicks butt from now on! Maybe all the neighbors moved because social services came in and questioned everyone and made them realize what they had been ignoring all this time - the extreme abuse of a child - maybe they were ashamed and didn't want the reminder of what happened in that house and their own culpability staring at them each day... I do have a request though, when you send us the update message can you include a copy of the link to get there? Cause I got it and my first reaction was what? who? then I saw lazycrazykitten on your address and that let me put it together. I def want to read more but want to make sure I dont miss out because I'm looking for you on one of the other six websites I visit each week! Good luck on finals! Don't underestimate the power of a snack and a nap!! I have finals this week - then a MONTH off!! woohooo!
person poohbear74
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, your back and the first chapter is really good!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha I like Harry already ;)
Can you tell me who is going to be the dominate in this story.. Harry or Snape? Because from this chapter I can see it being Harry and that would be really interesting. I barely ever find stories where he's the more dominate person.

Anyways, the story looks good so far!

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