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LOOVVVVVEEEDDD ITTT....WHEN WILL BE YOUR NEXT UPDATE? I'M DYING TO READ THE NEW CHAPTER...

This is getting intense. The way you wrote out Harry's confusion is very good since I didnt have to use much of my imagination to feel it. Same with the others, you truly write out emotions very well

Update again soon

I am really enjoying reading your story. Really love your brilliant wording and the sense of humour. Your Snape is very complex, so keep wondering what he would do next and what is on his mind, just like your Harry in the story. This is nice

I am really enjoying this story - I was a little put off by the summary (usually ones that end up in AMerica become "Harry Potter does Vegas" or whatever place it is) but this is really good! I'm loving the long chapters, and the building tension between our two heroes! I know you've only just updated chapter 3, but another update would be great!

Wow! I hardly know where to begin as I feel I could simply gush over this story for hours and hours and never even begin to touch on how fantastic it is. Your writing, your use of language...."I burn with hatred, Mr. Potter. Burn", "...why pollute your otherwise healthy body with junk food? Isn't that the American way? Of course it is and Harry reaches for the frosty glass.", ".....barking just like his godfather..." made me howl with laughter, and "Mr. Potter, it has been so long since I've experienced such a thing as happiness, I doubt I would recognise it anymore." had my heart aching for Severus. I could picture his tragic weariness as he said it. Utterly brilliant writing. I cannot compliment you enough. Although your deliciously long chapters make updates WELL worth waiting for, waiting is torture nonetheless. I hope you will ease my agony and update again very soon.

good chapter.

I really love this story because it shows something that most stories don't: ugly Snape. Normally he is portrayed as incredibly sexy underneath those robes with all this muscles etc.

I really love the change, because I truly think Snape is meant to be ugly and bad-tempered but he suffers and somewhere there is a good side to him. I believe Harry will fall in love with this side and there will be the whole true love is blind aspect to their relationship...

So continue as quickly as possible... I want to know if I am right ;-)

woah.

I totally love this story.

I got a long list of fics on my InsaneJournal that I like and I want to add your ficcy to the list.

I'm also curious, is AFF.net the only place you have your fics up?

damn harry's very molestable in this story so much snape is doing the molesting for us XD

This is a fantastic fic. I really Snape and Harry's arguments are like foreplay. And what is with Snape? Does he really love Harry? Is Ginny going to find out about them? Is Snape going to the wedding? Is Snape going to find the ring Ron gave to Harry and think that it is going to be the ring Harry is going to present to Ginny, and so they have another fight and end up having some hot, steamy, whatever? That would be very interesting to read, but whatever you have will be great too. Update soon!