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for All That You Leave Behind

by SickPuppy

person Rylan
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just finished the latest three chapters. Part of me is glad that Ginny lives - James doesn't have to grow up without a mum. Part of me is disappointed that Ginny is going to be so hurt when Harry and Severus get together. On the other hand, maybe our brilliant authoresses will devise a Plan B for Ginny, so that she finds her happiness elsewhere, and Severus still gets to comfort our Harry . . .

Speaking of Harry and Severus getting together . . . get them together already! *glares threateningly* The build-up, though written well, is killing me (and probably the rest of your fans).

Ta.
person Madhater
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay a chapter i'm happy to see another and to see smut in the next chapter, nice to have a harry/snape fic to read again
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i haven't read this in a while, i had a lot to catch up on. So much happened from the time of the wedding...damn that lucius. I was disappointed when Ginny lived, i was hoping it would just be sev harry and the baby. Blast that red-head >:( I loved this chapter, poor harry, I almost feel sorry for him. XD
person Dragonfly7
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please stop toying with the poor things...
person Ladynight
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The both of you know how to write great stories. Sorry about yesterday, I was going to review but it was really late so I decided to review today instead. TADA!
person mercedes
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! thank you so much for updating twice! *hugz* these two chapters are great! lol finally harry's starting to think that way! took him long enough! no I'm kidding, i know it was necessary to the plot and character development to make it take this long. you guys really are doing a great job of pacing it so that the emotions the characters display feel real. good job! i wish i could write half as well as you guys! I can't wait for the next chapter! let's see, was that over 25 words? *looks up and starts counting* yups! kk! see ya next chappie!
person Jan
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
**Smut alert next chapter!** YAY!!! Though I got to say that I was disappointed that you didn't off Ginny, I so don't like her!!!

Poor Harry, finally realizing his feelings, though I wonder how long he's going to keep repeating that it's just sexual frustration before he realizes that it's Severus that he truly loves!?

Please update chapter 36 soon ^_^

Jan
person Dani
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright! I was insanely mad after the last chapter, but you may have redeemed yourself some in this one... Just a small bit though! After the last chapter (I thought that it was the end... HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!) I was quite upset (understandably!). Anyway... How long do you plan to keep my favorite pair apart? I know your working up to it and I'm trying to be patient, but I really don't like Ginny anyway... not even in cannon... Please rush in with some really great Harry/Sev soon. Please!?!?
~dani
person ChaosProphet
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you had my hope sky-high that ginny was out of the picture (mean, yes, but i luv me some snarry), and then you crushed them like a bug, and now im psyched that harry is FINALLY starting to get it. most awesome. cant wait to see if you drag the UST out and make the boys suffer in their requited-unrequited love, or if ginny finds out! *evil cackle* write more!
person kalaway
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grr* I can't believe you didn't kill her! I'm glad the baby didn't die, but she just makes things messier and meaner! Ah well, poor Sev

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