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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
don't even think about those two. don't even think about doing that to Hermione or snape

DON'T DO THAT TO MEEEE! PLEASE. I WANT TO SEE THEM TOGETHER

TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY BIG FAVORITE
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. Please don't let Hermione get stuck with one of those two men. Please let Severus do something to make the curse go to Morgen instead, making her end up with Pettigrew. I don't think that Hermione deserves to be treated badly by anyone. I think that Severus loves her and will do something to protect her. If she does get recursed and ends up with Dolohov or Pettigrew, then Dumbledore and the other Order members will call Severus a traitor and force him to leave. He would no longer be a spy. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
person genna
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a choice?

D is a terror and a sadist.
W is way too jittery.

Neither, Tom.
Neither, Tom.

Severus has an impossible choice. I wouldn't want Morgen either because of all the manipulation. Dumbledore is going to have a fit. He can't win for losing.
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I could just kill Morgen myself. That stupid....deep calming breaths....in....and out..... Okay I'm good. Great update! Seriously intense. Now how's Severus going to get her out of this one? Please update again soon! The suspense is killing me!!
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG NO! What an evil cliffhanger. Please protect Hermione.
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! What a cliffhanger! LOVED the chapter. :D
person cnlipfor
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Severus can get Hermione out of this one. I mean he would never let someone he...cared for be touched by another man, right??? Please oh please update soon!!! It made my day when I saw that you had updated because it has been a really lousy day for me.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. Wow. What a chapter cliffie!! cannot wait for more :)
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am a huge fan of the story and I don't know if I've written a review. If I haven't, shame on me. And if I have, I have a bad memory. But enough about me. Your story is gorgeous. I love all the original characters you've created and the world they all inhabit. I love seeing what Morgen is going to do next, and you never disappoint me with her evil and audacity. I feel so bad for Snape for having to deal with her his whole life.

I am patiently awaiting the next chapter, because I know it's going to be complete insane brillance.

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