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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more. This story is such an interesting take on the marriage law. And I love that you disregarded the Epilogue... HP Compliant!
Yay!!!
Anywho, the different points of view are so creative. I can't wait for more!!! Soon please... this and "Wizard's Porn" are two fics I am really looking forward too. And they are so different. Your writing style varies, what a talent!
Yay!!!
Anywho, the different points of view are so creative. I can't wait for more!!! Soon please... this and "Wizard's Porn" are two fics I am really looking forward too. And they are so different. Your writing style varies, what a talent!
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was a lovely story and I really enjoyed reading it. A bit soppy, but still lovely. Thank you.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and another you've written (to catch a thief...), but i noticed you haven't updated in a while. I hope you will soon. I'd love to see how you end both stories!
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I lost this story for a while, but refound it the other night! It's simply lovely. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More chapters!!! Please keep them coming!!!
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not particularly fond of 1st person but it does fine. At least it's a site better than some out there. It is a bit confusing at 1st with each chapter being in 1st and not all the same character but you get used to it after a while. I'd recomend sticking with one or two characters for 1st person stories in the future though to cut down on the confusion. Over all not a bad story. Where does his debt come into play, though?
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update! I love the way you write. It actually reminds me of a book I read a few years ago called "Smack". It had a similiar type of writing, where every new chapter the story would switch to different point of views. I love this story!
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a fabulous story. I really hope you finish it. I love the way you write it in the different POVs -- very different, very interesting. I love the way you have drawn the characters, especially the Malfoys and Severus -- they all needed a bit of redemption. Great story.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting tale. I love to see other people's ideas of the little details JKR left out. I really enjoyed seeing friends from Severus's past. What surprises me about this tale is that without any big conflicts between Hermione and Severus, without much conflict at all, you are still managing to keep my interest with your Original characters and your own special take on the Wizarding world.
Thanks for writing.
Thanks for writing.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't help but think that Hermione would keep her name when she married. I did, and that was decades ago when it was quite uncommon to do so. I don't know how different it is in Great Britain (I live in the United States) but I kept mine and it is supposed to be common now, although it is not so in our town. I recently read that in the US, 20% of college educated women keep their names whey they marry.
I liked the comment about fixing the roof!
I liked the comment about fixing the roof!