rate_review Reviews

its kinda short, i mean its only like a paragraph long, unless AFF is glitchy or somethin

It sounds like a good idea, but you're going to have to do a hell of a lot better than that to make this fic worth reading.

interesting....update

nice

I've seen summaries longer than that.

What the fuck are you thinking posting a chapter with about 70words?

Don't even say it was a prologue, coz a prologue should at least be about 1k words.

It was the potential to make a good story but if your just going to post shit like the first chapter then just stop now and save AFF some disk space.

Will this story be in First Person POV (by "First Person" I am assuming you'll use I's, is that correct?)?

If so, can you please change it from Normal POV ("Second Person" like all other stories I guess)

Thanks