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love it want more update soon thank u

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And tee hee! Green!

Very nice!

OMG, what a Christmas Gift. That was truly a surprise for old Sev. I love where this is going.

Love how you don't know which one is which until the last. I never thought Severus would cry over Harry. Maybe Harry over Severus. I like the beginning of this story a lot but I really don't like when Harry calls Severus, Sev. It sounds so silly. Is there more of this story to read? I hope so.

this story is fantastic! i regret avoiding it for so long. the title just doesn't do it justice. but i understand that it started as a oneshot. anyway, i love, love, LOVE the characterizations. and i appreciate that there's no playa hating. ei: all those stories that make ron and ginny utter buttholes in order to justify harry being with severus. so yeah, i love this... so much that at the moment i have absolutely no constructive critism (which is saying something since i LIVE for it). i think you've shown the anxiety of new parenthood realistically with humor and heart. having 2 of my own i can relate to harry's over emotional response to severus' lack of enthusiasm. lol. keep up the great work.

Wow I totally love this story! Is there a way for me to knwo when it gets updated?

Poor Severus, he is not going to deal well with having to teach girls....that. I feel sorry for any boys they might ever be interested in XD

Very cute story. Update soon please.

*laughin* poor severus! i feel so sorry for him right now. well anyways i hpe you update soon.

hehe poor Serverus! I take it your going to drag him down then hopefully take back to the top right?

What a fabulous update! You walk the line between angst and humour really well as I was empathising with Severus and Harry but laughing at the smae time at some hilarious lines: "meat and two veg" among them! Thank you! I eagerly await the next. SP