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for The Sins Of A Father

by Bunnyboiler

person Jan
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! That's harsh. Poor Harry.

Please update chapter 22 soon. I can't wait to see what Riddle and Malfoy have planned for Severus. ^_~

Jan
person amazingZ
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update. :) things are getting more and more interesting.
i'm just worried that harry is becoming a home wrecker. he said he'd never bother severus again but he did.
could you make it so that severus initiates the next sexual interaction between then.. i really dont want harry to turn out as the bad guy. :'(

well thats just my input. cant wait for the next update. i'll be waiting.
person yaoified
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this! so wonderfl... kinda sqeemish abot the whole father/son thing - even if they aren't blodd... bt i love the way yo write and that is more then worth it! i love this!
person Nikte
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!! I LOVED THESE LAST CHAPTERS,they were full of the exact amount of angst and love and smut, you are a great writer, you certainly know how to create an atmosphere. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
person Krishna
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intense chapter. Worth the wait I'll tell you that. Loved the 'IM Chat Talk'.
person krishna
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy God. Much baggage here? I, personally, am enjoying the way the relationship is going. I'm just curious as to how it's going to end up at the end. However, I do think Harry & Sev both were a bit out of line, but that's a teenager for you :)
person krishna
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is this: wow. Please tell me that Sev isn't 'substituting' here. pretty please?
person secretlf
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHH!!! THe last chapter was awesome!! Finally we have some one on one action!! And thanks for updating so quickly, i think it took you less than a week. Dont stop!! Cant wait for the next chapter.
person krishna
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank Buddha they're talking again. *wipes brow in relief* I'm still rooting for Sev & Harry here, not Harry and Carter :)
person krishna
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES! I'm such a Snarry fan. Thought that this was a great chapter; I'd just watch some of the homophone usage (break/brake). Great chapter. I so can't wait for the next chapter. *Keeping fingers crossed that Lily doesn't find out*

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