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for Dinaer

by erin

person Vittani
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(puts away pitchfork and torch)

Nothing wrong with the chapter at all. N i dont think that you need a beta really. I'd offer as i am online all the time and i do love this story but im betaing three other fics right now and i dont really have time to write my own.

I liked the introduction of the elf and am looking forward to what happens when the other students come back.
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Getting more interesting.
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot for new chapter!!!!
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yay you updated verry good wish i could help withe the betaing but i can't dislexsic or how ever you spell it. ^^

though loved the chapter prity eye opining vurry informitive.
person Selera
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome keep it up!
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!!!! Fantastic story!!!
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and hope that you update soon!
person alma
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omfg i love you it's soooooooooo gooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!
0/////0
thanks foe the cookie it's 10:59pm here in arizona and i scared my room mate cuz i noticed u updated and i was so hyper!!!!
^///^
an it was worth it! man u are awsome. i love reading this u update reguarly and with everything right now ur the only thing i look forword to.
please keep it up
ur loyal fan/reviewer
=^.^=
awaitng ur next chapter with much antisapation!!!!!!!
person Nikte
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I

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