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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD So far, i'm liking the looks of this. I'm looking foreward to reading more ^_^
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool beginning for a story, i hope to read more when you write it. also i understand completely (from one student to another)
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice start i love 'larry' he he fics and this looks like the start of a really good one hope u update soon
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it has a promings start i cant wait to read more(sorry im a bad speller
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very iteresting beggining. Your writing could use a little help though it's not nearly as bad as some I've seen here so far. You only have a few correctable places here and there. I do hope you'll keep writing this story, it seems very good by the looks of the first chapter. I fyou want to, I can help with the grammars and such.
You can reach me at varjoratsu84@luukku.com
You can reach me at varjoratsu84@luukku.com
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoy the Harry/Lucius fics, and their really aren't enough of them out there. I'm fairly certain that you've managed to hook an audience with that chapter and I look forward to reading what you've got in store for us!
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start! Please add more soon
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay, what makes a review good enough? is it the fact that it is here? or what it says? because this review is here now. and it says that I LOVE THIS STORY!. i understand being busy, but if the update was sooner rather than later that'd be great!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do hope there is more to this tale...
Great start and captivating.
I love to read more.
Great start and captivating.
I love to read more.
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I do so love Harry/Lucius, there's just something so delicious about it. Loving the possible magical creature hints... maybe? I hope so!
Can't wait to read more.
Can't wait to read more.