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for The End of Pretence

by altoforensics

person KageMori
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
darn it!! the story was really getting good too! i hope that you will update again soon i really want to see whats going to happen next. please please update soon!!!!
person Selera
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story you have to get more up and soon. Please? I'll give you cookies! EVIL COOKIES!
person sanda
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person sanda
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapters
person snapefan
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. i hope harry will be able to get his money back and everyone will get what they deserve.
person snapefan
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far and am looking forward to more.
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will there be an explanation as to why Ron and Ginny have wands when they are 9 and 8 respectively? Also, why are they allowed to perform underage magic?
person Amarilis
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there

I just started reading your story and i think it is very interesting!! I like the way Harry is figuring things out on his own and i think the twins are the best allies!! Plus i love stories where albus is evil!! LOL cant wait for the next chapter!!!
person sanda
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oohh, I like this already and look forward to more.. specially the Dumble/Ron bashing muwahahahah

Ja ne

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