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for Fire Call

by fbowden

person duskstar
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great beginnings...can't wait to read more!
person Jilliane
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! What an absolute pleasure to come back from CrashedComputerHell and find another installment of this fabulous story! Your writing is flawless, and I so love how you've got Severus snarky as ever. "Nelson's Column? Is that some lewd acronym?" Excellent! Please, PLEASE write more!
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH! I love it! I want more! Its excellent and needs to be updated five times a day! I DEMAND IT! *cracks whip*
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, another wonderful chapter! You are so good at writing great one liners! I loved Ron's comment that Harry was losing his mind! More please! SP
person anniea
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
there is only one way to describe that and it is wwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! *kisses*
person Lucifoy
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sooo knid hot! i love it! specially the end, nice sex description!! you really can write.
person pinktarg
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done. Your writing style is solid and your words flow with ease as should be the case with well-written text and nicely-executed story telling. I look forward to your future endeavors. Thank you very much, I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
person Jilliane
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You added a chapter, and absolutely brilliant it was. I really loved it, it was just as entertaining and well written as the first one, with great humour. I see you've posted this as both a second chapter and a stand alone sequel, not quite sure why, but I think you could turn this into a great chaptered story. I hope you'll consider it because I want to read more! You've got the characters of Severus Harry down pat, such a pleasure to read, please, please consider adding to this! Again, you write it, I'll be back to read it!
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you've continued this story! Chapter two is just brilliant! You have such a gift for humour - thank you so much for this, and please continue it! SP
person fbowden
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello everyone! Thanks for the lovely reviews! I have written another chapter due to popular demand! Just waiting for the beta clean up and then I'll post it! Do let me know your thoughts!

Regards,
Flic x

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