This is specifically for the entry fo In the Garden by Slasher454
This is not only a worthy entry for this collection of stories, it's phenomenal on its on. The plot is original and engaging. The characterizations for Ron and Hermione are spot on! The one for Severus is OOC but only because it is a Severus that has undergone personality altering changes and I believe the nature of the changes are both believable and correct. I was highly impressed with the quality of everything about this fic. This Oneshot is perfect but I can see how the story could easily be fleshed out into a multi chapter fic. Again, I ❤️ it, brava!
This chapter is virtually unreadable--sentences are often incomplete, wrong tenses are used and it generally seems to have been written by someone who is barely literate (at least in English). I could not even finish it because it stopped making sense. Sorry if this seems like a flame, but I think this should either be corrected or removed.
"...Lily came out just fine." Bloody brilliant. Bless!