I really liked what you had written of it. It was decently written and the plot was constructed pretty well.
If you've found a new home for this story, I would like to continue reading it, so if you could send me the link at this address: ice_hearted66@yahoo.com, it would be greatly appreciated.
If you still haven't found a new home for it, you can contact me at the given address (see above) and we can discuss details. My friend and I would delight in the challenge of writing a piece another author began, and would be happy to keep you in the loop during the process.
I'd like to adopt the story Two Is Better, if it is still up for adoption that is. If you would e-mail me with your answer, I would appreciate it.
Thanks,
Gigi
llarsenangel@juno.com
Angelstar3999 :)