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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry! I had hoped that Draco would get there in time.
schedule
January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The format- the spacing, the spelling, the grammar- turned me off and made your ideas difficult to make out. You seem like you have a good idea but your writing just didn't convey it. I suggest a beta and a repost.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was sad but i liked it!