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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed ready this story! thankns for writing it
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very beautiful piece. Her emotions and feelings were realistic, and I found it interesting that you paired her with a Hufflepuff for this piece. Well done. :D
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! I'm glad this is done and posted now; I've been on tenterhooks waiting to see how people like it. I've probably been nearly as nervous as you have; I feel connected to this story just from helping you comb out the kinks. Like I told you a bunch of times already, well done and I love this story.
--Amanda
--Amanda
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really sexy...I like how you made it really sensual without being overtly smutty. I also liked the line about him picturing her under him when he watches her. Hot. Great job.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo hot! I love finding good oneshots, none of the waiting around for the new chapter and all of the satisfaction of having a good read! Thanks for that!
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it!
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED IT!!!!!!