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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this and i'd love to see how it goes on from here.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's good. Really good. The lyrics aren't needed though. Just my humble opinion,as you've encompassed them nicely in the story. I look forward to more.
Nicole
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
Nicole
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah! I wanted to cry! I love that song and the way you did it was incredible! I would LOVE if you continued it please!
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This seems like it could be a very good story. Please continue.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is an excellent story set to one of my favorite songs. that song always makes me want to cry and so did your story. it was very emotional for me. it was wonderful. if you choose to write more, you can be guaranteed that i will read it.
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very nice!