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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person Damiana
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I think I might leave him tied up so that he can't just decide when his spanking comes to an end.

Chapter 13---*readies drool rag*

Hehehe. He got exactly what he deserved...

Hmm. Now I wonder if Hermione will hear Lucius' exclamations and if she'll finally understand what's really going on.

There is such a lovely set-up for more canings in the future...both of them lied. She about the number of strokes and he about his desire for the same.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is so naughty! I bet Hermione didn't even stop to consider that he might actually enjoy it. Wonderfully vivid and detailed account; both points of view vying for who was getting the most pleasure from the experience. Though my money would be on Lucius.

Fancy acquiring a taste for caning from juvenile punishments - I bet he doesn't use the rod on Draco for that very reason.

I can't see these two keeping out of each other's clutches for much longer, frankly. (Hopefully).
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
person genna
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this Lucius. He emotes, is calculating, and is dominant. I think this is one of a better Lucius' portrayals.

schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
did he deserve punishment or pleasure?

god, that was so hot!!!
i`m going to love the chapter when the two of them will finally get to it... *gg*
vic
person Tenar10r
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fun!
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Found this story this morning and am instantly hooked! Had to read all you have on here before reviewing but...Gah!! I have always been a big fan of regency romances and add HP to it? You are simply wonderful!! Keep posting as fast as you can and I will read it as fast as you put it up. Your Lucius is beyond words and I want one! Thanks for this so far.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh yeah, damn that was good! I usually prefer Lucius to be the spanker instead of the spankee but I am now a convert!oh to have that gorgeous guy laid out bound to my bed - mmm!

Is Hermione gonna have a crisis over her feelings about this? Hopefully Lucius can help her sort that stuff out - I'm sure he would have some interesting stories to help her see it's not a bad thing.
person pittwitch
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The alliteration may thrive, but only in print. Don't ask me to say the words out loud, lol.

Hit the bare arse -- most definitely, and screw the wand Hermione, bare-handed baby!

Naughty naughty miscounting of the "funds" -- could get you in serious trouble!

May I please have "scrambled eggs" for breakfast tomorrow? Hungry witchy -- hungry, hungry witch.

Poor baby, has a little "hang up" problem with his trousers, eh? I'm sure it can be soothed.

Teased, tired and temperamental -- whose alliteration is rolling now? Temptress taunting with titillation.

Knitting pattern drawn by a drunk -- ROFLMAO -- now I know you're peeking in my house. Had to quit knitting ;)

I think he deserved more teasing ... but then again that's just a witch's POV.

schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When you mentioned there being a lemon ahead, I was hoping that Lucius and Hermione would finally get together. LOL. Ah well, seeing Lucius from Hermione's point of view was equal enough. And I agree with you 5 seconds is Lucius' limit for meekiness, a second more, it would be sort of weird and make you wonder if he went through a complete psychological change.

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