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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful story and cannot believe that its over already xxxx

Cannot wait for you to write another great story xxx
person Muffy
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such a clever tale. I loved the epilogue, I appreciate the detail and it just made me smile. Thanks again for writing you are simply brilliant. *hugs* :)
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an incredible story. I loved the epilogue. I think that all of the changes to their world made everything better.
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful conclusion! Poor Astoria! She's actually five years older, physically. And wow, Lucius has still got it, for a 73/65-year-old. But then, wizarding lives are about 50% longer in your fic, I think. The kids are so cute. Overall, I would say that your epilogue is about 7 times better than the DH epilogue, and that's my more conservative estimate...

I can't wait for your next story. You need to turn Lucius loose on your muse to get her going again. I'm sure he could inspire her ;)
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely ending to a fabulous story. It was interesting to get a peek into the lives of the others, especially Severus who I happen to have a soft spot for. I have to say that out of all the children Lilah was my favorite, demanding little thing that she was. I'm so glad I took the time to read this and I can't wait to see what you come out with next.
person jw
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 50/epilogue - happy sigh..... you are so good to us. I think you covered EVERYTHING we asked about! Lucius was never his own grandfather (phew!). the Lynx legacy stood strong and flourished. and Snape is happy and wealthy, and has the honor of seeing little Severus Malfoy arriving in a few weeks. all the Malfoy children - goodness, Hermione might need a bunch of nanny-elves for that many kids. Merlin is as inscrutable as ever, but it's nice to think that he's watching over the magical world. again, thank you for sharing your talents with us; your stories are a pleasure to read. brava!!!
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I love the idea of the Gaunt cousin now firmly attached to the world that once rejected him, and Filch as Headmaster! You've tied up most of the loose ends I had questions about and kept firmly to the world you created within the book's world. Now I'm going to have to wait for your next effort, I guess.
person Mia
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have absolutely NO complaints about this story. Not real ones anyways. Just the usual, Does it really have to end? Are you sure you don't want a sequel or just one more little sex scene? But truthfully, I don't think I have ever read a story that ended with that just right feeling of being finished like this one. And my pseudo complaints are really just in jest. This was marvelous and I will reread it often. Just a magnificently glorious and original catching story. Thank you so very much. I truly have appreciated reading this. Every bit of it.

~Mia
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, the ending really was surprising - In a good way.

I really enjoyed this LaBib!
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, silly Lucius and his need to reassert his manliness...as if ANYONE doesn't know how manly he is! Men are strange creatures. I am really glad that they've ended up happy and complete, though.

That naughty pic you posted from Brotherhood made me crack up. It really irks me that I'm too poor for real cable right now! One of the sexiest men alive playing a horny Irish mobster and I'm not seeing it...ugh. Where is the justice in this world?

I was just reading some episode guides on Wiki and I just about peed my pants at the sheer ridiculousness. I hope your epilogue makes me pee my pants too. And yes, I am rather sleep-deprived and nutty at the moment. :)

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