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Yay!

Hm. An interesting twist to the mystery of the Veil... Merlin was imprisonned beneath an enormous rock so I can buy the explanation. :)

Nicely done. *declares LaBib redeemed*

Completely! thank you. :) i just get so immersed in the story that i hate it when you just stop! especially when i have to wait a WHOLE week for the update! :) well lucius is lucius he had to know what happened in the weekly visits (i just wish i could have seen too!). though i will agree with you on the fact that lucius is much better as an adult! (though i wonder would he not be very much like that as a seventh year too?) well it still would be a wonderful story if you wrote it! :) so what next---and i really hope that you have more planned then just an epliclog!!!!!!!!!!! :) i want to see at least a nice full chapter of the next nine months, the birth and then a) you can make things a lot longer and have some trouble b) a nice over view of their future. well those are my requests so am i waiting another week? --sigh-- i hope it is a quike week!

Yay!!!!! Lucius is a free man! I'm so happy!!

A crumbled candle in her ass!!! Bloody hell Labib, you're too much.

Their memories are quite amusing. I'm glad they were able to manage so well together. So, Merlin is the Veil, or controls it? That was a nice twist.

Ah, yes, glass houses and stone throwing and all that...I know...

And you are most certainly not in kindergarten, my dear. You are at the very least in graduate school like me, writing dirty stories while in class. ;)

I'm glad I surmised correctly that Lucius was being released. The Veil or should I say St. Merlin worked that out conveniently. It was worth the moments of angst. It's so nice that nothing has changed, and at the same time, everything has changed. I wonder what everyone else thinks, though. Mr. Merlin didn't fill them in on that.

Looking forward to the rest of the detente! And of course cute babies and insatiable shagging and more sarcastic banter. :D

Is she alright to portkey whilst pregnant?

Oh, maybe the veil gave him one night for all his naughties! One night or a hundred - Azkaban is going to be terrifying!

They let them have candles and matches?

So the veil sent them back to 20 years after voldie fell?

How did she get pregnant... Well, Lucius... when a witch and a wizard love each other very much, and have a little 3 by 3 cell, a rusty cot, a manky mattress and a LOT of creativity...

I wonder if the veil decided that 4 years of weekly kinky sex in a prison cell all in one go was funny?

It's MERLIN! Awww... I thought it was a girl.

Oh... that's why they have candles. *giggle*

Yes, I feel much better. I like how everything is wrapping up into a nice happy ending. I still can't wait for the next chapter to see just how much everything has changed. It'll be interesting to see how the school worked out.

On another note, I think it's crazy that only 2% of people review. Just crazy. Well, I suppose if you keep begging more will slowly join the ranks of reviewers!

Thanks for the sense of relief. I don't think I could handle having a veil in my life. Thank you for not keeping them apart.

Wow. The candle crumpling was just...hmm. Yes, wow. Okay then. I feel overly thrilled that you made the veil be so form of Merlin. I like that quite a lot. Thank you so very much for this wonderful and lighthearted chapter. It was definately called for after the events of the previous one. You are bloody marvelous as usual, and I thank you for sharing the love.

~Mia~